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Monday, 16 January 2012

Ever carried anyone's heart with yours?

She gazes out the window,
wondering what can make her swallow her pain..
All she sees are the city things,
never the sunlight on the dying grain.

The winds blow, touching her cheeks..
Appear the clouds, to not let the Sun burn her skin..
Flowers blossom, knowing she's unwell,
wondering if forever, that's where she remains..

She knows all the efforts the nature puts in,
not being a stranger.
To make her feel good again
and not to give in and be the same mess-maker.

How she wishes the winds knew,
that those remind her of a fragrance..
How she wishes the clouds understood,
protecting her, they multiply his absence.

The winds blow faster,
the flowers grow bigger,
Telling her not to be afraid..
The sun goes down like setting a crown,
of inspiration and desires, on her head.

For her life seems without any pleasing sky,
down the street, across the breeze,
there comes a butterfly.
Asking her if or not can she feel a thing,
she looks at it, about to cry.
Says, "Strange is all that feels my heart.
Though I ain't a queen of spades,
I'm rich enough, to feel this pain,
The passionate pain that sharpens the blade.
Feels out of the picture, like kept in a cage.
Not a nice place, for each satisfaction,
but a cruel place, for each remorse.
The butterfly simply rose, gathering up its courage.
Asking, "Ever carried anyone's heart with yours?"

38 comments:

  1. Beautifully expressed..nature seemed to have conspired with the poet in all honesty..it made me lament the futility of monotonic city life..and interesting question at the end!

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    1. Yes, Rohit. I agree. Thank you very much! :)

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  2. this was written so beautifully! I love your writing style.

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    1. Oh, thank you! :) I'm glad its getting liked!

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  4. i am rendered speechless because your piece of yourself is extremely beautiful. Thank you...
    PME

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    1. Thank you so much for these words! :) Thank you!

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  5. Beautiful! Just came across your blog and I adore it. :)

    Lauren
    www.laurensthoughts.com
    @lrstewar

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    1. I'm glad you did, Lauren! Thank you! :)

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  6. Oh wow. I didn't know you wrote poetry :)

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    1. Well, I try.. sometimes!
      Glad you liked it! :)

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  7. The title says it all :) Beautifully expressed!

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  8. you are a wonderful writer. keep writing. i found your blog on leloveimage and kept on reading it till end. its wonderfully written. no match..:)
    may God bless you !

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    1. Hey.. thank you so very much!! I really feel honored! It meant a lot to me! Thank you once again! Yes, I'll keep writing! :)

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  9. This is really beautiful =)
    Thanks for stopping by my blog.
    I love all the images in your posts.
    Following you now!
    BTW could u help me by telling me how exactly do you put the like thingy st the top? *puts up confused expression*
    xo

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    1. Hey it felt great to read your feedback. :) Thank you a million! And no, never will I stop writing! NEVER! :)

      Sure.. Will mail you! :)

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  10. beautiful words my dear. never stop writing, you have a gift.
    xoxo

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    1. Thank you! No, I won't.. I can't! :)

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  11. You write so beautifully! <3 Incredibly talented, that's what you are :) Carry on writing! xx

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    1. Oh.. thank you, Olivia! Its been a pleasure to get such feedbacks! Thank you once again! :)

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  12. You inspire to write abstracts more and more :)

    You know the way poem progressed...and ends....amazing.

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    1. Thank you a million, Chintan! Your words meant a lot, really. :)

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  13. Great work...you nicely maintained the rhythm of poem till end. Wish I could write like you. Superb..Keep it up n keep writing:)

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    1. Such words inspire me to write even more and more!
      Thank you so much for the feedback.. :)

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    1. seeing wonderful Indian bloggers like you is always a big inspiration for me :)

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