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Wednesday, 1 August 2012

Of Moving Forward- Part V

I am moving forward and there are always going to be turns trying to confuse and stop me from where I want to reach.
Behind everything to lose and to let go of, the Sun shines. It is the mind that wanders and wanders with a combination of colours making the day feel chaotic. I do not understand these colours for I never really met them.

With a bell creating noise all over the verandas, we would play a game of Jolly. We would draw a mark on our palms before we reached school in order not to get a punch on our back. That was the rule. Marking our palms, punching and getting punched by the people we thought were the closest of friends, if left empty. A punch we called fun. A mark they called black.

Perhaps the heart is in search of that punch. Over again. In search of the truth, these naked eyes. Knowing the reason why I am here, surrounded by the breeze treating my cheeks in its own way, I want to reach the place I see with or without my eyes open. And let it kill me later.

22 comments:

  1. I love how your writings reflect how deep your thoughts are.
    Such a retrospective post :)

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  2. beautifully written. Sooner or later, you'll get that punch.

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  3. The loss of a close one. Something that remains a loss. Nobody can fill up the space they took. For their place was theirs, just theirs.

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  4. the ones that deserve us will be there for us even though they are far..

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  5. most of the heart the heart has answers to all our questions but the noise of the mind overshadows it all....

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  7. that was so beautiful !
    heart wrenching but beautiful :)

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  8. Sigh. I have been moving forward and back for like a decade now :( It is one of the most challenging things in life. Rather be quick!

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  9. The way you write , it feels that you are such a matured writer. however, you are so young. it is really a blessing of God to think at such a deep level.
    Proud of you:)
    Stay Here.Keep writing.


    Charan

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  14. I love how you can work your way with words. Way to go girl !

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  15. A punch in the heart.. I wish I could let go of everything and just move ahead, the way you are :) Beautiful words. Your writing actually speaks to the reader.

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    im going through a lot of things and i feel hopeless :(

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